假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in great need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I’ll pay more attention on studies. After all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
短文改错
My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the
ticket window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park，I
was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.
Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him，but I had no
luck.Wandering in the park，I felt alone without any companions.Worse still，I had no money，so
I had to walk home，covered as much as 5 kilometers.
We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a
chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It
looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We
also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with
them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. On the way home we felt
tiring. We all thought that we had a very good day. We real hoped that we could
get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，每行都有一处错。按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边番号后面横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边番号后面横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词；在错词下划一根线，在该行右边番号后面横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请按要求规范答题，否则不予给分。
I’v been to China for two years. My father in
England sometimes write to me, asking me how long
I’ll stay here,and when I’m thinking of return home.
The answer to the questions is rather simply:I do not
know when I will return to home. At the moment, I
have no reason to return to England. I dislike living
in China;I enjoy meeting Chinese people and travel
around the country. My work here is very interested,
and there are so many more things I don’t know about
China that I hope to discover them in future.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy 
corner．Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees．Broken bottles were left laying here and there．There was a damaging car in the center．The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell．One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park．Since then, great changes have 
been taken place in that corner．All the rubbish have been cleared away．Flowers and young trees have planted all over．Now birds come 
here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life．It has taken on a new look．
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Though great progress has been made in science these years, but there are still many people live
in poor conditions．They make their living by collecting and selling used thing．Their children
cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there．Why
you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population
explosion．A president of a developing country once say: “It is us who are to blame for the
poverty because we used to ‘produce’ children without limit．” Although this few words sound
simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion．
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