假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help but playing online games and chat. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future！What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.
Yours,
Jack
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八
），并在其—F面写山该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其卜面写山修改斤的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I see your advertisement in a student magazine and I'm interesting to know more about you diving courses. First of all, I should explain that although I can swim I'm not very confident in the water. But you mentioned your advertisement that your instructors are full qualified. Thus I believe they'll be able to teach someone as me to dive. I have one week's holiday in the three week of June and would like to know th
at if there’s a course running at that time. How much does a week's course worth? Finally, if I decide to go ahead, are there any special equipment I need to buy or is everything provided by your company?
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it . As she did this , lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt.. I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face. My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us .It was turned out to be her own cup, that she had left on the shelf be mistake. The assist
ant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny.
下面短文中共有10处错误，每句中
最多有两处，请你对其进行修改。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Joe,
I’m back at school now. Thank you very much for the wonderfully week I spent with you and your family. During the week you teach me how to swim, boat or fish. I really appreciate your taking me around your place and I really enjoyed me. Your mother is such good cook that I think I must have put on nearly 3 kilogram in just one week. I’ll remember forever the seven happy days when we spent together. I did hope you’ll be able to visit our school sometimes next summer. Thank you again. Let’s keep in touch with. Remember me to your family.
Shirley
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I used to be a loser and everything which I did always had wrong. During that time, I was extreme disappointed with myself. I couldn’t do everything well however how easy it was. In the meantime, an old friend of me encouraged me to stand up again and told me that I was still young enough to try more times. I took his advices and made a great effort to achieve something. Then I found I could do things much more better. Now I not longer think I am a loser. I determined to do everything well.
短文改错（共10分）
Different people have different ideas about music. __________
For me. I like rock music because it’s so exciting. But __________
my 
favorite rock band, the “Foxy Ladies”, are one of __________
the most famous rock band in the world. I also like _________
the pop music. My classmate Li Lan loves dance music. _________
because she enjoys in dancing. My best friend, Jane, _________
likes Jazz music and she thinks Jazz is real cool. _________
My brother also likes rock much, thinking them amazing. _________
But my mother thinks rock is boring. “I like some relaxed . ________
music,” she says. That’s she likes country music, I think. _____
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