假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
Dear fellow students,
There is a serious phenomenon in our school that many students crowded in the school store to buy snacks and some students even eat snacks in class.
Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also waste of money. In addition to, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too many fat and sugar. Eating snacks improper may lead to fatness and illness. What’s more, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, that pollutes our campus.
Dear fellow students, it’s high time that we pay attention to this phenomenon. Our high school students, should develop good eating habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balance diet is essential for us.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown and bought present for him. Then I take the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would be very happy when I saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got in the train and stood in the front of me. She looked tiredly. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to hers. The old lady thanked me a lot and seated down. Seen her smile, I felt happy. I will always be ready to help other in the future.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the summer vacation I think I should do something meaningfully instead of touring. So I got a job at a fast food restaurant and worked there for a cleaner. I work 7 hours a day for three weeks. The job was bored and seemed endless, that made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. After all,I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work earlier in the morning and went to home late in the evening. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term. Now, I understand that hard work means. I think it is really a successful experience, which was worth remembering for ever
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文. 文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games. There will an important game next month. But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.
But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.
下面短文中共有10个错误, 请找出并按要求在文中标记并改正在短文下的横线上。
如多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉, 在短文下边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。
如缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在短文下边横线上写出该加的词。
如错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 在短文下边横线上写出改正后的词。
My grandfather was a teacher. He was the head teacher of a school for boys at the ages of thirteen and eighteen. I know that he was a kind man, because when I am young, he gave me presents, and set me on his knees, and told me stories. And the boys at his school were afraid of him. At school, when he walked into a room full of noise boys, there was silence at once. When he looked at a boy with a certain look in his eye, that boy went red in the face, and looked down his shoes. If a boy brought to him careless work, my grandfather picked up a boy's book and threw it across the room, shouting，“Do it all again, and take it back in the morning！” If the boy was later, or if he forgot to take the work, he had to do it again.
仔细阅读下列句子，每句中均有一个错误，请找出并在横线上改正，请按下列情况改正：
如该句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写上该词，并也用斜线划掉。
如该句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
如该句错一个词：在错的词划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。The flowers in the field smell sweetly.
Lucy fell in love Hangzhou when she came here.
Knowing is one thing ; doing is other.
Have you seen the boy lay under the tree.
Although he is a boy, but he knows a lot about Chinese history.
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