假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help but playing online games and chat. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future！What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.
Yours,
Jack

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第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多与的词用（／）划掉，在该行的右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
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Dear Mr. Brown ,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help.         76_______
Before you came to teach us , I had not interest in        77_______
English .My pronunciation was terribly. I could             78_______
Only speak a few words. But one and half year later ,               79_______
I now think English fun to learn . I got a lot from your   80_______
encouraging words. I will always remember what you     81_______
said , “ If you try to , you can be No. 1 !” I hope you’ve        82_______
had pleasant journey home and will come to China       83_______
again sometimes in the future. I will write again         84_______
and send you the photos we take together .              85_______
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第Ⅱ卷 (共35分)
第四部分写作(共两节。满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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Thank you so much for your photo taken by the                76.________
Kenston Lake. They are very beautiful and highly praised        77. ________
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Mr.Harris to see if any can be choosing for the photo            79. ________
exhibition. I’m going on holiday the next month. I’d             80. ________
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3 day holiday together. I’ll go by train. There’s so many          83. ________
traffic on the roads that driving is no more pleasure. Of           84. ________
course, I’ll take my fishing tools so that we do some fishing.       85. ________
Hope to join you soon.
Yours,
Tom

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