假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your puzzle is common problem among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next，trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies, Unless anyone is in trouble，you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours，
Lily
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
This morning I went to the shop to change
the coat I bought it yesterday. But the salesgirl ________
treated me coldly. At first, she didn’t admit that the ________
coat sold in her shop and then she said I made ________
it dirty. She gave various excuse to refuse my ________
request. So I got angrily and quarreled with her. ________
Then the manager turned up and asked how was ________
the matter. Before I told him the whole thing, ________
he said sorry for me and criticized the salesgirl. ________
At last, they changed another coat for us. With ________
satisfaction I take the new coat home happily. ________
短文改错
An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught _________
in the fence around his farms. He thought the poor __________
animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his __________
jacket and put on the animal. Then he started trying __________
to cut the fence to free the animal. But as soon as __________
the kangaroo were free, it jumped up and ran away __________
with the jacket. The farmer was worried because of his __________
wallet was in the pocket. But, to my surprise, __________
when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, __________
still wore his jacket with the wallet in the pocket. __________
短文改错
This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very
crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy
in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be
sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with
the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.
Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This
uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have
heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.
短文改错
The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.
One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. In that case we are possible to neglect the details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the Committee of our
community will organise the activity. All residents they are interested in farming are invited to
take part the activity. Weather permitted, we’ll ride bike to do some farming this Saturday on a
farm. It is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some vegetables,
plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be trained and guide while
farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste
some fresh produce unless you are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!
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