假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school will set a voluntary service club on April 22nd. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others.
The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in ourcity, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and soon. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcometo join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please you’re yourapplication to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union willcontact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.
March 8th
The Students’ Union
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ms Karen, 38 years old, has been helped the old over the past 12 years. She often encourages her daughter—Celest, 10 years old—help the old people as well as. Visiting the seniors who have limited or no family support are what all of them do every weekend. When Celest was the baby, Ms Karen Kong brought her to visit the old so no one looked after her. Whatever, as time went by, it became a meaningful weekly affair and a time to get along for her daughter. She thinks it’s importance to teach children to love the old and hopes the virtue can be passed on.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其正下方写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We high school students have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wise. Firstly, some of us are upset about our look. It’s unnecessary and unimportant at all. It’s one’s inner beauty which really matters. Secondly, we sometime seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, parents and classmates. Faced with this, we should find proper time to have a talk with them, tried to remove the misunderstanding. Some of us have few of friends. I think being open-minded and friendly will be benefit to us. Finally, we may fall behind others, which make us stressed. Actually, we can encourage us to work efficiently with determination.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help but playing online games and chat. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future！What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.
Yours,
Jack
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I’ve received your e-mail. Don’t worried about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and it is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in the future. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardly, you will succeed. I’m looking forward to hearing a good news from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第1l处起)不计分。
I’m very grateful to my English teacher．In the past，my biggest shortcoming used to being carelessness，that worried me a lot．To make matters worse，I was so anxious to seek the fundamental reason in my failure．I just devoted me to huge amounts of practice，not paying attention to repeated mistakes．Fortunately，my teacher noticed it and offers to have a long talk with me．She gave me lots of advices on how to get rid of it．After I was persuading to change my attitude，I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessness and gained confidence as well as.It was the support she had given me made me what I’m today·
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