假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处
加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Some peoples hold opinion that wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honesty labor. They work hardly and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleasing. Even their spend money is a kind of happiness.
But some people believe wealth can’t bring him happiness. For example, when one makes a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth for him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.
In my opinion, I think there is no doubt whether wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is not anything。
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. My grandmother is so a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.
Many scientists believe that life begins in the ocean long ago. For age man used the ocean to discover and explore new lands. Now man spends a great deal of time or money discover the ocean. We know it is rich at minerals which the world need. We know too that it contains a plenty of food for all the people in the world. We know that if the salt were taken from it, it’s water would turn the deserts into rich farm lands. We know a great deal about this land frontier, as it has called. But we still need to learn many more about it.
很定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、侧除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
别除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
After watch "English TV" last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and asked him to go to see a film in the afternoon Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the doorway, I saw Mr Liu, my head teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese fell behinD. especially my Chinese composition He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day．In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do the well. That was really good ideal What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mother is a village woman, who is already in fifties.She has very little education, and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people. She often asked me how I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time on my study. Once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed
for several days. When I got home, I found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes. So is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___）, 并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One morning, though the clock rang aloud, Mary didn’t up until eight. She hurried got dressed, snatched over her schoolbag,rushed towards her school. She ran as fast as he could, so that she might miss the first lesson. But to her disappointing. she found the school was quiet. After she entered into the schoolyard，it seemed that there was nobody in the school besides the guard. Mary was wondering what had happened while she saw the word on the bulletin board. It was Sunday.
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