假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk about that you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay closely to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and try to remain quietly and calm. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. Whether it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that someone is missing or hurt, tell your teacher immediate.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
| 例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was the am  completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday onevening. |
Dear Sir,
I’m a middle school student. I am willing be a volunteer to help others. Although I am busy I still wanted to visit Old People’s Home as a volunteer. Apart from do some cleaning for the old people, giving some performance with my friends are another thing I can do. I believe I’ll be the person who can get on good with the old there.
Besides, I am ready to give a hand to sick children in hospital. I love children but I’ll devote myself to taking good care of him. In a word, I would like to help those people whom need help.
Please get in touch with me by phone or by the mail.
Warm-hearted
Jim
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加：在缺词处增加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
例如：
Miss Cooper was a teacher works at a school for boys and girls. She taught the chemistry for all the students from different grade in the school. Sometimes the new classes learned rapidly, but sometimes they were slowly. One day, one of the classes has been studying for minutes while Miss Cooper suddenly asked, “What is water?” Luckily, nobody could answer the question, so Miss Cooper felt sad. The moment Danny, who was not one of the brightest boys in the class, raised hand, Miss Cooper said in an exciting voice, “Please, Danny!”
“Water is a liquid what has no color until you wash your hands in it, then it turns grey,” replied the boy.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my view, the Internet is helpful. It is known to all, the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news home and abroad and got as much information as we can. We can also attend to the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online. Beside, our ability to operate the computer can be improved great.
So we should not be addicted to the Internet, or we'll get our life and study destroying. In addition, we should keep off the harmful website. Anyhow, this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.
The Siberian tiger is one of the most beautiful animal in the world.
It is also one of rarest.
Today only about 1,000 are left, some of them are in the Hunchun Nature Reserve.
The Chinese government has created the reserve to help saving the tiger’s natural habitat.
But the Siberian tiger is the only endangered species.
Other famous animal in a danger is the giant panda, whose habitat is in China.
The panda was the symbol of the World Wide Fund for Nature.
Thanks of scientists’ hard work, the number of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590.
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