假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
第二节短文改错（每题1.5分,满分15分）
Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat 76._______
with them .The first man got over his shock and politely said to 77._______
the angel, “ I’ve suffered by back pain for years . Can you help 78._______
me ?” The angel touched his back, and he had recovered. 79.________
The second man pointed to his glass and asked if the angel 80._______
could cure her poor eyesight. The angel touched his eyes, 81.________
but he could see everything clearly. 82.________
The angel then turned to the third man, threw up his hands 83.________
in fear. “Don’t touch me!” he cries， “ I’m on disability pay! 84.________
I don’t want to be a normally person!” 85._______
第 Ⅱ 卷（非选择题，共35分）
第一节：短文改错（共l0小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
When I was young, I don’t know what friendship was. When I stayed with my friends, a warm feeling came out of the bottom from my heart. Now I have grown up and got many friend. And I have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship. When I am happy, they are also happy and share the happiness with them. When I make progress, they will be very exciting. Instead, when I’m in a difficult situation, they will offer help to me. So friendship is never an one-way ticket. If we want to get it, we must treat others good at first. We should always be ready help others, especially when they are in difficult situations.
五、短文改错（共10小题，每题1分，满分10分。要求规范答题）
What should you do when your parents become angry? 76. ________
If they get mad, try have a conversation with them about 77. ________
the problem. Remembering not to shout at them. Usually, 78. ________
they will try to change, and it will take some time because 79. ________
they have got angrily all their lives, and that is all they know. 80. ________
You might have to change your method couple of times. 81. ________
Do some nice things for your parents that they didn’t 82. ________
expect, like cooking, doing the dishes, washing cloth, or 83. ________
clean the house. If this doesn’t work, bring in a friend that 84. ________
you feel comfortable with, and have him or her to help you. 85. ________
第Ⅱ卷（共两部分，满分35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节。满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有—个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加—个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
The first fact I worry is noise pollution．Peple can’t sleep 76．___________
well if there is too much noise．That’s why such many people 77．__________
prefer to live in the countryside rather than living in noisy cities． 78．_________
I suggest all the factories and cars not make terrible noise．Although 79．_________
they make terrible noise that are not allowed，they should be fined， 80．__________
and we can also produce cars which don’t make terrible noise． 81．___________
Another pollution is rubbish pollution．If nobody makes so much 82．________
rubbish，one day we may live in a world filling with rubbish． 83．__________
Some people throw waste paper about．I suggested rubbish 84．__________
should be put into different kinds of dustbins or papers bags． 85．___________
第二卷(共35分)
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分)
We all know that healthy is very important to US. Both 76.
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports 77.
and games help US keep strong and healthy. If we do not 78.
take any exercise，we may feel tired but get sick easily. 79.
There’re many different kinds of sports we can do them， 80.
such as playing ball games，running，walking and swim. 81.
However，now we have too much homework to do in 82.
every day. We hope that we’11 be giving less homework 83.
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope 84.
that our school~a12 hold a sports meeting every term. 85.
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