假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
短文改错（共１０小题，每小题1.5分，满分１5分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory. 76. ____________
But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77. ____________
to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78. ____________
saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79. ____________
like to have. One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80. ____________
was looking for a job, too. This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81. ____________
when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82. ____________
address to your present boss as I have been trying to find 83. ____________
a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84. ____________
he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish. 85. ____________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（∨）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错
| Nowadays more and more people are sending their children, even middle school children, overseas for farther study. Some people think their |
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| children can receive a better education and learn foreign language |
67 |
| as well. The most valuable thing is what they can learn to depend |
68 |
| on themselves and improving their understanding of the world. |
69 |
| But some people are not in favour for this. They think studying |
70 |
| abroad cost over ten times as much money as in China. Besides, |
71 |
| children are too young to take care of them. Many parents |
72 |
| worry the safety of their children. What’s more, they might follow bad |
73 |
| examples. In my opinion, the government should set up various schools |
74 |
| and colleges to meet with the needs of people. |
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线
上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Carlos was born in Manila in 1950, at the age of two 76．_________________
week he was taken by his father, a musician, to the United 77．_________________
States by the sea. He spent his first ten years in the American 78．_________________
Southland that he attended school. Between the ages of 10 and 18, 79．_________________
he travelled in the Southern and Western Atlantic areas, living in 80．_________________
Florida and had graduated from his school in 1968. Early in his life 81．_________________
he had a great interested in music instruments and in 1965, he 82．_________________
learned to play the piano and quick became an expert on it. 83．_________________
Since he graduation from Florida State University in 1973. 84．_________________
he has been a famous pianist. He is not marry, saying that 85．_________________
his music school comes first.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正短文的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上打一个勾（∨）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错
| In a national spelling contest in America, 11-year-old |
76._________ |
| girl was asked to spell a certain word. But with her softly |
77. _________ |
| voice the judges were sure if she spelled the word with letter |
78. _________ |
| A and E . They talked it over and finally decided to simply |
79. _________ |
| ask her what she had said. Immediately the girl knew he had |
80. _________ |
| mis-spelled the word. But instead of lying and told the judges |
81. _________ |
| she had said the correct letter, she told the truth which |
82. _________ |
| she had said the wrong letter, so she had lost the contest. |
83. _________ |
| As the girl walked off the stage, the audience stood |
84. _________ |
| to their foot clapping to applaud her honesty. |
85. _________ |
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
Last Sunday, my father invited his colleagues to our home for a
dinner party, included his boss. However, my three-year-old sister 76.
stared at my father’s boss sitting across from her all time during 77.
the dinner. He can hardly eat because of her stare. So embarrassed 78.
was the boss so that he checked his tie, touched his face 79.
and look at himself in the mirror. Even so, nothing stopped her 80.
staring at him. He tried to pay not attention to my sister, 81.
and finally it was too much for him. He couldn’t help asking 82.
her, “How are you staring at me?” Everybody present had noticed 83.
her behavior and the table went quietly for her response. My 84.
sister replied, “My daddy said you are a big eater and I don’t 85.
want to miss it!”
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