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2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Grandpa’s birthday party. It was not easy to have his children and grandchildren all back home together. so they just busied themselves in playing their cellphones, totally ignored their grandpa, who let in a deep sigh and left the party.
There is no doubt whether cellphones have a negative impact on our lives. Heavy use of cellphones actually widen the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely. Worsely still, addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school, which adds up to elders’ worries.
As far as I was concerned, it’s necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. And I attach great importance to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmony family atmosphere.