假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a good friend who name is Liu Mei.She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class.Clever as she is,but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about.One evening,she told me that something happened when her parents was out.She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while she smelt something burning.She stopped look out of the window and found a cloud of smoke come out of her neighbor’s house.She called 119 immediate.Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire.Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.