假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语法错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My brother, whom is a Harvard graduate, work in a multinational company. Recently, the company has failed several time in its attempts to break into the Chinese market. As a new manager in the charge of the sales department, he is trying every possible means to promote the products of his company. Because he has taken some effective measures, the profits are expected to rise at 30%. I am real proud of my brother. What’s more, she has promised to give me five thousand yuan while my summer holiday comes. If so, I will be able to afford go traveling. How a wonderful piece of news!
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题两部分共35分）
第四部分短文改错（满分10分）
Have 
you ever heard from the saying: All work and no 76．
play make Jack a dull boy? What this means is that if you 77．
study all the times you will become a boring person. You 78．
must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise 79．
you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the 80．
person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have 81．
a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work 82．
you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do 83．
not have to compete your classmates. No one can be 84．
happier in studying seven days and seven nights a week. 85．
Error Correction（10 questions；1 for each，full marks 10）
本题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：
如此行无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列要求改正：
此行多一词，则把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，且也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词，则在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该词。
此行错一词，则在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
第一节：短文改错
We’ll never forget a day when 76_______
my classmates and I paid a visit a 77_______
chemistry factory. It was a large 78_______
one with nearly 20 000 workers. It
looks like a garden and we saw col- 79_______
orful flowers grass and trees there.
We also visited some workshop and 80_______
found workers working hard. We
talked to them and learned a lot of 81_______
We understood them further. On
the way home we felt very tiring, 82_______
but we both thought we had a very 83________
good day. We really hoped what we 84________
could get more chances of leaving
the school and learn about society. 85________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China．I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you．I'll meet you at the airport and then you will take Bus No．8 for my home．You worry about the weather here in your email．In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city．It isn't very cold, but you needn't bring many clothes with you．During your stay here, I'll take you to 
some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks．I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
John
短文改错（每题1.5分,满分15分）
Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat 76._______
with them .The first man got over his shock and politely said to 77._______
the angel, “ I’ve suffered by back pain for years . Can you help 78._______
me ?” The angel touched his back, and he had recovered. 79.________
The second man po
inted to his glass and asked if the angel 80._______
could cure her poor eyesight. The angel touched his eyes, 81.________
but he could see everything clearly. 82.________
The angel then turned to the third man, threw up his hands 83.________
in fear. “Don’t touch me!” he cries，“ I’m on disability pay! 84.________
I don’t want to be a normally person
!” 85._______
第二节 短文改错（共10题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
Doctors tell us that holidays are not necessary. We 76．___________
should rest from work a week and two each year. They 77．___________
say we should leave our homes and goes to another part 78．___________
of the country. We should go away for holiday. Then 79．___________
after the holiday, we return home fresh but strong and 80．___________
ready to another year of hard work. This seems to 81．___________
make sense. But is it true? No exactly. Some people do 82．___________
not like to stay in strange hotel or strange houses. It is 83．___________
especially true for young children. They don’t like sudden 84．___________
changes in their lives. They like their homes better of all. 85．___________
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