假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector came to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket and became quite upsetting. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, that was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.
答案与简析：
76. famous前加上a。 （名词数）。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注） 80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别） 81. picture→pictures（名词数） 82. passes→passed（动词形） 83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住） 84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）。
(一)
Most families in China hoped their single children will 76．_______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77．_______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78．_______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 79．_______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80．_______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81．_______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82．_______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83．_______
Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84．_______
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85．_______
下面是全国高考试题中的短文改错题。
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 76. _____
Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____
Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____
the mountain, the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____
climbed the mountain, we ed monkeys, visiting temples 80. _____
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._____
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____
head touched the pillow.
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Mark,
It’s pity you can’t go over your lessons with us. We will take the English finally exam next Thursday, which is also the last day of the exam week. This is different about the exam is that it consisted of two parts, that is, answering three of the five questions and writing articles. We are supposing to go over our mid-term exam papers, textbooks and class notes to prepare from it. The grade is made up of three part. The final exam will make up of 55% of our final grade, the reach work 20% and the mid-term 25%. Please feel free to contact me unless you are still not clear about it. I hope you will recover soon or get a good mark in the exam.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
第二节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1．5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（"）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms．He
thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the
animal．Then he started trying to cut the fence to free the animals．But as soon as the kangaroo
were free, it jumped up and ran away with the jacket．The farmer was worried because of his
wallet was in the pocket．But, to my surprise, when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at
the door, still wore his jacket with the wallet in the pocket．
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago．One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks．Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale．They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital．Docto
rs examined them but gave them some medicine．They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem．I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety．
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