假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder so many children are tired with lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents andteachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Recently I've conducted a survey on if girls should 1.
lose weight among my classmate. Most of the students hold the 2.
view that girls should lose weight. In their opinion, girls are slim 3.
are more beautiful and attractively, and they are more confident in 4.
their study and work than those who are fat. Therefore, a few of the 5.
students have a different opinion. We think it’s a waste of time 6.
and money. In addition, lose weight may be harmful to their 7.
body and mind. After all, anything is more important than 8.
the health. If girls take weight-loss pills and then stop doing that 9.
some day, they will become fatter. So it is no need for young girls 10.
to lose weight as long as they are healthy.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分
When most people thought of precious things, they 1_________
refer to money or jewelry. But I have everything very 2__________
preciously in my room. It’s not an Mp3 player or a cell phone. 3________
It’s the view from my window. I’m lucky live near a park. 4________
My window face the tops of the trees in the park. And below 5.________
the trees I can see children playing on the playground, 6_______
young couples walk quietly, and old people sitting 7._______
in the benches. The whole world is before my eyes. Most of 8 _______
my classmates like to go online, but when I have a free 9._______
time, I just sit in my chair but enjoy the most precious 10._______
thing in my room: the view.
短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world.
Everyone know we should keep the balance of nature, ____________
or we don’t always do as we say . ____________
A species can become endangered with different reasons. . ____________
But the very important one is their living places are ruined. We ____________
cut down trees without plant new ones, and we pollute the place ____________
where animal live. Because of this, they have no home and ____________
they are going to be die out. ____________
Other reason is money. Many tigers are killed by those ____________
who want to sell our fur and use their bones for medicine. ____________
We should do everything which can be done to change the ____________
situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分 ）
此题要求对一段文章改错。先对每一行做出判断是对还是错。如果是对的，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如果有错误（每行不会多于一个错误 ），则按情况改错如下：
此行多一个词，把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词，在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词，在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行
没有错的不要改。
Most Americans would find it hard to think that what life ____________
would look like without a car. But, some have realized _______ ____
the serious question of the pollution caused by the car. ____ ________
The polluted air becomes harmful and dangerous to health. ___ ________
One way to gett
ing rid of the polluted air is to build a ____________
car that doesn’t cause pollution. That is how several of the ____ ______
large car factories have been tried to do. But to build _________
a clean car is more easier said than done. Progress in this _________
field has been slow.
Another way is to take place of the car engine by a ___________
steam one. Inventors are now working on steam cars as well as
electric cars. Many makers believe that it will spend __________
years to develop a practical model that pleased people.
短文改错 (10%)
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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