假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I take the school bus to school every day when I was young. Alvin, our bus driver, picked out twenty kids in our area and dropped me off after school. Because my family was poor, so my parents seldom bought snacks for me. About once the month, he would make a stop at a local stores and buy each of us an ice cream. The kindness that he showed was amazed. Remembering the kindness he showed, I called him up ten years late and thanked him. I told him that he probable didn’t remember me, but I still remembered him. I could sense the excitement in his voice when he thanked me calling.