假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday. There were lots of visitor standing in front of ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightening animals that I quickened their steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had a hard time look for them, but I had no lucky. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Bad still, I had no money, so I had to walk to home, covering as much as 5 kilometers.
Last night I was lonely at home because my husband took 1.______
Ann, my daughter, for New York to see his parents. At 8:00 2.______
I decided to watch a TV programme. I turned the set and 3.______
started to watch a TV play. I am not usually interested in 4.______
TV plays but I was complete delighted with this one. I was 5.______
enjoying it very well when something was happened to the 6.______
picture. I tried hard to adjust(调) the set because I want to 7.______
see who turned off to be the murderer, but the set was out of 8.______
order and the picture was so bad that I finally had to give in, 9.______
turn off the set and go to bed at nine, much early than usual. 10.______
下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A survey basing on 1,000 
students found that 80% of senior students slept less than
nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main
cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while
doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is some
students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.
Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,
teachers should encourage their students make good use of their spare time.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
After supper Liu Wei came and ask me to go and see a film with him. In our way to the cinema, we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her cry. When we asked she lived, she said she did not know. So we took him to the police station and asked the polices to take care of her. After that we went to the cinema. And when we got there, the movie was almost over. Although we missed the movie, but we felt very happy because we did a well deed.
Time flies as an arrow. I’m already in the second half of senior Grade 3 before I realized it. it
is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school. At the present. I’m busy
review my lesson in order to take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to Beijing
Universiv, that is one of the best university not only in China but also in the world. I’ll try my best
to turn my dream into reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize our
wishes I do believe everyone will able to enter a very good university and college
.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该增加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正的词。
注意：1. 原行没有错的不要改；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Li is a well-known doctor in our city. Kind but patient, he is always ready to do what he can help his patients. One day he learned from the medical magazine that patients will feel more pain if pleasant music is played to them. Soon he got an office in his own. So he decided to have beautifully music playing in his waiting-room. However, on one morning, an old lady who was sitting in the crowded waiting room became angry while listen to the music. She said, “We were all waiting to see the doctor, but he’s just playing the violin in his office instead of doing her work.”
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