假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sometime in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the sixth to presenting the speech. How a relief when I finished it! After the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.
Don’t disturb him. He is now devoted to read now.
I live in Beijing, where is the capital of china.
While doing an experiment, you must do like the teacher has told you.
He said he has known the answer to the question.
His illness added much difficulty with our life.
We go to see a film every third weeks.
The museum you mentioned just now lies in ruin now.
Under the teacher’s help, he passed the exam successfully.
How about two of us take a walk down the garden.
At the table, we should pay attention to our table manners.
Mr. Black,
We're very gladly to have received your money and some reading materials. Thank you very much. We had been studying hard since we came back to school. Under the help of our teachers and classmates, we have made great progresses in our studies. So we often praised and encouraged by our teachers and parents. We have made up our minds to study hard than before to learn every subject good in order to be admitted to key universities in the future.We're looking forward to see you, but we have no chance to go to the Hangzhou ourselves. So we hope you can post us a photo of yours soon.
Best wishes,
Yours,
如下短文共有10处错误，每句中错误最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。按以下要求进行修改：
1）增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词；
2）删词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
3）修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Do you prefer to travel by plane or by train? To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages traveling both by plane and by train. Travel by plane is time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest on the trip，but it is too expensive. Unless you travel by train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can appreciate the beautiful scenery on both side of the railway. However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, and we can take a good rest. So you can see every coin has two sides. You'd better to choose either of them depend on your own interest and economy.
每句中最多有一处错误。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在改句后面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该句后面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；She could hardly afford for the medical care.
Now people get a lot of informations from TV.
Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down.
There were too many nice things that I didn’t know what to choose.
We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago.
Some parents think useless for girls to go to school.
I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.
Filling with many people, the room is crowded.
She was a child star and began to perform in the age of four.
It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my MP3 player. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to pay my attention on my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is true which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
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