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Nowadays, many parents expect too many of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters should study hard in order to admitted into an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict in their children. However, they don’t realize how a great pressure they had put on their children. It is the great pressure that often get their children very anxiously.
So I hope that parents can provide a proper environment for our children. Only in this way they try their best and success at last.