假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：l. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As far as I know, time is not always enough all of us. So first of all, you need to arrange your time well. You’d better to make a long-term study plan to take up his weak subjects. And an short-term plan is equal necessary, if not more important. You have to make sure that you need to do each day, each class or even each minute. At the same time, it’s quite essential to keeping healthy. So take exercise for at least one hour and sleep for no less than seven hour a day. And don’t forget to eat well. More fruit was always right for you.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, my whole family went to climb the big hill. My father and mother told my elder
sister and I that the first one to get to the top of the hill would be give a toy. Hear this, we
began to run up. At first I kept ahead, but a few minute later my sister was ahead me.
However, I didn’t give up. I reached the top firstly in the end. We enjoy the beautiful
scenery and had a picnic on the top of the hill. I was the most happiest one all the time,
because I not only won a toy and also learnt that one shouldn’t give up easily.
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，假设下文是你同桌写的作文。文中有10处错误，请你按下面的要求在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
Nowaday more and more people dream of be famous, and the internet has become a new approach to this. On the Internet, many young people may be familiar to a group called “Backroom boy”. The group caught people’s eye because its funny perform. They just pretend be singing while in fact the sound is made by the original voice from video. When asked why they do this for the first time, they said,” We like playing jokes to each other.. There were some foreign videos online, looks very funny and interesting. So we decided to make our own. Just for a fun.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。
One day I went shopping at a gift shop in Shanghai. I was greatly interesting and I lost me in beautiful goods. After I paid for that I had bought, I left my handbag on the counter. There was about two thousands yuan in it. I had already walked out of the shop while a young shop assistant walked up to me in my handbag. He insisted on my check it. I opened the handbag and found nothing losing. I thanked him and offered him a reward of 100 yuan, he refused to take anything. I was deeply moved by his selfless act on that day.
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处写一个漏字符号（
）, 在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
下面短文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train.
They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows them
enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return one not only is cheaper but
also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some
people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because
enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey.
Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When
they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.
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