假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下边写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
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On Monday morning, I was on my way to school when suddenly as I saw a boy knocked down
by the car. In a hurry, I ran over and found the boy was serious hurt with much blood on his face.
Immediately, I call an ambulance and the boy was taken to the nearest hospital. For my relief, the
boy was fine and would recover in a few day. I went away without leaving his name. I was late for
class, and I felt happy for what I had done. As a proverb says, “Help others is the source of happiness.”
I feel our duty to make the world a better place to live in.
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ohn’s house became too big for him after his wife died, so he bou
ght a smaller one
nearby. There is a very nice old clock in his first house. When some people came to help
move a clock, John thought, “I won’t let them take off my beautiful old clock in the truck.
Perhaps they are likely breakit.” So she carried it on his arms. One the way, a small boy
looked at John for a few second and said, “How interested you are! Why did you buy so a
large watch?”
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜
线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的
词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Great changes have been taken place in the w
ay people communicate with each other. In the
past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other in the telephone
Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on
the paper, they e-mail to each other on the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier
to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing. They
worry about whether people can be as closely as before.
Great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each other. In the past people write letters to share informations and later they talked with each other in the telephone. Now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicating. And instead writing on the paper, they e-mail to each other on the computer. As a result, people find that quicker and easier to communicate, and at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing. They worry about whether people can be as closely as before
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。全文共十处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误渉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
此句多一个词：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。
此句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在正下方写出该加的词。
此句错一个词; 在错的词下划一横线,在该词的正下方写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改只限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning I went to the English corner in the park near my home. It was three years since it was found. Many middle school students as good as college students and foreigners take part the activity. People there practice speak English by talking about something interesting. People also exchange the experience in English learning. I think it is good chance for me to use that I have learned in my English class. I was felt very cool after I got back home. I’ll try my best for learn English better,for it is so wide used in the world.
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