假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After a final examination, I got a letter from my best friend and his parents live on a farm. They invited me stay with them for several weeks. I was so excited that I could sleep all night. When I got to their home I was warm received. I lived in a big and nice room. I enjoy the life there very much. Every morning we got up early and walked at the farm where we could enjoy the fresh air or beautiful scenery. We gathered some flowers here and there, and I found it filled of funs. In the afternoon we did our homework. I did have a good time.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
第四部分：
第一节：
Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of a
small town .We set off earlier in the morning.
After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon,
we had picnic near the town. Everybody was attracted by the beautifully scenery
and we took a lot of picture there. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing,
some rowed boats on the water, but others flew kites.
We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip for us,
during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help.
We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others.
In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Modern technology takes us a lot of convenience, especially when it came to the Internet. You can find all kinds messages in just a few minutes on the Internet. It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around ti find your books. Therefore,recently many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.There have been reports in the America about some people trying to steal others personal information for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easy,but not all information are good to society. For example ,you can find such information on how to kill people,how to break into a bank, many things like that．I’m afraid the problem will becomoe more seriously in the future.
短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Swmming is very popular．People like it in summer because water makes people feeling cool.But if you swim in a wrong place，it may not be safely．Last year，a lot of people died when enjoy thrmselves in water，most of them were students．Nowadays，some people are not careful enough
in swimming．They often think they swim too well that nothing will happen on them in water.Don’t forget：better swimmers died in water．They die not because they were not good swimmer，but because they were not careful．So don’t get into the water when you are alone．If you see“No
swimming”,don’t get into water．Unless you remember that，swimming will be safe．
Dear Lihua,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me ______________
two weeks ago. I had been thinking about the question you ______________
asked me. In my opinion, you should come back before ______________
you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, which you ______________
are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. That will ______________
be pretty easy for you to find a good work. In fact, I know a ______________
few big companies in one city is hoping to hire people _____________
like you. For other reason, I think it will be more convenient ______________
for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. _______________
Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return back. _______________
Best wishes!
Minghua
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
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