假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
My husband 96-year-old grandmother came to live with us for many years of independence. We did all the thing we could to make her feel comfortably in our home, including giving her the private line for her bedroom. One evening we are having a party while the phone rang. It was the telephone operator, that asked, “Do you have a grandmother upstairs?” “Yes,” my husband replied. “Well,” the operator again continued, “She can't remember your phone number, and she like a cup of tea.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect.” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it. It’s easy to understand. Once I wanted to learn swimming. At first I found difficult to control my body. I just sank into the water. I feel very frightened. Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed. I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised. A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim. How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before.
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（满分10分）
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 76.______
of Senior Grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 77.______
than one month before I graduate middle school. At 78.______
the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to 79.______
taking the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 80.______
Beijing University, that i
s one of the best universities not 81.______
only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 82.______
my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 83.______
studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone 84.______
will be able to enter a very good university and college. 85.______
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节：短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Li Hua,
It's time to recall those beautiful days when we 76.
spend together. You are the very person who gives 77.
me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerable 78.
person who knows exactly that I need. 79.
Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly 80.
fell ill, it was you carried me on your back to a nearby 81.
hospital. You took well care of me while I was having 82.
a injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. 83.
Without your help, I would failed in the exam. 84.
I still have thousand of blessings for you. May all 85．
your dreams come true!
Yours,
Jane
VI.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When World War II broke out, Disney joined in 81.____________
the Red Cross (红十字会)and went to France , there 82.____________
he stayed until the war over . After the war, he 83.____________
returned Kansas to work for the only company 84.____________
where made fairy story cartoons . This was 85.____________
the kind of wor
k he likes best . He determined to 86.____________
find better ways of making the cartoons moved 87.____________
so that the cartoon characters (卡通人物)will seem alive. 88. ____________
Later he joined his elder brother, Roy, in Hollywood, 89. ____________
California. There they soon put up their own company. 90.____________
短文改错(共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Miss Brown,
We have received your application last week. We regret 76. ______
to inform you that our company has hired other girl for 77. ______
the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, 78. ______
we have decided that we need someone with more office’s 79. _____
experience for this particular position. You have impressed 80. _____
us, but, with your desire to learn and your ability to work 81. ______
hard. We hope that you will apply for position with our 82. ______
company some times in the future. We would like to 83. ______
thank you for your interesting in our company. Please 84.______
contact to us if there are further questions. 85.______
Yours sincerely,
John smith
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