下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的下方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend our school hold a sports meeting. Knowing it was my last high school sports meeting, we decided to make it a unforgettable experience for all of us. We first attended the opening parade, for our class had made a lot of preparations. Our parade took up the shape of the letter “V”, indicated victory for ourselves. To our excitement, our parade performance was a great success. Before the parade, the games started. My classmates attended various event and their performances were very impressively. Finally, the result was announced. It was amazing that our class won the second place. I believe this sports meeting will be remain a precious memory for all of us as time goes by.
We are going to take the College Entrance Exams in about sixteen days. Therefore, many students still don’t know what to balance their study, rest and physical exercises while prepared for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to go over their lessons, what results in a poor health and low efficiency of learning.
As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise make a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave us enough time to rest and sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficient. What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study, future work and creative activities.
In brief, as we are preparing for the Exams, don’t forget that rest, exercise and study were equally important.
Dear sir,
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An Road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And yesterday something went wrongly. It made a noise when turning on. At first it was low but gradually it became louder and louder. To make matter worse，it even stopped working. We all felt disappointing. I am writing to ask for help. Would you please find someone to repair them? I would be at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much.
Li Ming
After I finished my classes, I walked to home. Suddenly, I saw a dog run towards me.I was very frightening. I guessed that it would attack me, because I started to run before the dog reached to me. Soon, the dog caught up with me, but to my surprised, it ran past me as if it hadn’t seen me. I see some people running after a dog. I asked them the reason why they were chasing after the dog.They told that the dog had bitten his chicken the night before.
短文改错. 本题共有10处错误，请在原文中改正（满分10分）
My bicycle went wrong again. Tired with repairing it again and again, I decide to buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked such cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeeper told us that it is the latest bicycle. He wanted to charge me 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’t afford for such an expensive one. Then I chose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, it was much better than the old one.
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