假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
My mother always bought gifts to me for my birthdays. With my fifteen birthday around the corner, she asked me I wanted. For the first time, I realize how lucky I was to have been born in such a fortunate family. I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed. That was because I told my mother that instead of get an expensive gift, I’d love to use the money to help others. At the first , she felt surprised. When she realized I was seriously, she offered me 500 yuan. I bought some toys and went to the orphanage(孤儿院) in our city. I handed out the toys to the child and had a good time with them.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum (流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. Before the police came, they told the passengers to get into the bus and stay far away. Then they closed the highway, as a result of whom a 15-mile-long traffic jam was soon caused. With the help of the dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.
下面每个句子中均有1处错误，请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；There was a time that I was spellbound by novels written by Charles Dickens.
The manager changed his marketing plan yesterday because what he had learned from a film.
As a matter of fact, you can make your English fluently by talking with native speakers as much as possible.
A large troop of soldiers have been sent to the forest in the search of the missing kid.
He has directed a lot of films, many of them are still popular till today.
At last, his life in prison came to end and after that he was elected president of the country.
Elias was also put in prison because he once helped Mandela blew up the government building.
You can’t imagine what difficulty such a great person had made his dream come true at last.
It is suggested that customers should pack up the remained food and take them home.
Although many cities in the world compete with the opportunity to host Olympics, there is only one winner every four years
I want to have a pen friend, hopeful a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar with mine. In my mind, she is someone who are interested in travelling, swimming, and play table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have pet dog as I keep one at home for some time.
Although we are thousand of miles away from each other, but I can share with her our travelling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we had in common. And I believe I will improve her English by doing so and learns more about her country.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. What wonderful a time I'll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don't want me go out. They are afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck, fall off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.
Yours,
Li Bing
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词，
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year. Now I’m spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching themselves the important rules and techniques of the game, but I’m getting better all the time. We have a neighborhood teams that plays against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing for one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won’t make any mistakes.
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