假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文．请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（＿），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处
Tim, I am Li Hua． This is my last year of high school, and I'll graduate this summer．I'm eighteen year old．
There is three people in my family and I'm the only one child, who is very common in Chinese families．My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher． We lived a happy life together．
I'm cheerful boy． Besides my courses, I have much hobbies, like playing football, basketball and swimming．In the past, I collected in a lot of stamps, which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays．I wonder if you can tell me something about myself, your family and daily school life．
单句改错（共5小题，每小题1分，共 5分。每句只能改一处,在原句中直接改正）Air hostesses all smile when they serve for the passengers.
No one matches him when it comes to swim.
A poor nourished body needs more energy to combat disease.
Foreigners always associate China to the Great Wall.
Not until then he realize the importance of the problem.
My wife and me spent two weeks in London last year. We went here in autumn. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End. It was convenient as we do most of our sightseeing on foot. Taxis was quite too expensive. We couldn’t understand the bus routes, but my wife didn’t like traveling by the underground. She said it made her to feel sick. We went to look at the places which all tourists see. We saw the Buckingham Palace. We came shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money. What we liked most, though, was going to theatre.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, the old building , that we were living in , were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So I had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
This morning I went to the shop to change
the coat I bought it yesterday. But the salesgirl ________
treated me coldly. At first, she didn’t admit that the ________
coat sold in her shop and then she said I made ________
it dirty. She gave various excuse to refuse my ________
request. So I got angrily and quarreled with her. ________
Then the manager turned up and asked how was ________
the matter. Before I told him the whole thing, ________
he said sorry for me and criticized the salesgirl. ________
At last, they changed another coat for us. With ________
satisfaction I take the new coat home happily. ________
短文改错
An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught _________
in the fence around his farms. He thought the poor __________
animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his __________
jacket and put on the animal. Then he started trying __________
to cut the fence to free the animal. But as soon as __________
the kangaroo were free, it jumped up and ran away __________
with the jacket. The farmer was worried because of his __________
wallet was in the pocket. But, to my surprise, __________
when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, __________
still wore his jacket with the wallet in the pocket. __________
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