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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文章中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2，只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
All parents wish their children, especially junior high students, can go to top university and have a bright future. So they always expects their children to make fully use of their time to study . They don’t allow them watching TV ,play the computer games or go out to play with their friends . Some students just complained that their parents are only concerned about their grades and not their other needs.
In my opinion ,how our parents are doing is out of nothing but love. The most important thing , I think, is that they should learn to communicate with our parents, tell them that we’ll never let them down and will work harder earn trust and respect from them.

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your letter. I’d like to telling you about my first surfing online
experience.
This summer vacation when the computer was connected with the Internet,
my parents and I sat in the front of the monitor together. My father asked me
download some stock software, which could enable him to buy and sell shares
online without going outside. My mother loved Korean soap operas, so I
downloaded some for her but also told her how she could watch them online. At the
end, I searched for some English study website to help improve my listening and
speaking English. The Internet has allowed him family to enjoy a more convenient,
relaxed and efficient life.
How about your Internet experiences? I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
　　注意：
　　1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all
kinds of bad things to me . I was scaring to see him.
So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to
dine out . I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well.
By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me . Now we
have become close friends.
In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we have the
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school． I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel
like prisoner． I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet． The only thing I have to do it is studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply． There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost． I need your help．
Best wishes，
Li Ping

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