假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m very much glad to hear that your shopping centre will build non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it’s a good idea to do so, for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to other customers’ health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers don’t like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping centre may cause fire, which is dangerous to both your possessions and the safe of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.
Best wishes!
第二节短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断∶
如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改正∶
该行多一个词∶把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词∶在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意∶原行没有错的不要改。
Get a good education is more important today than 76． _______
ever before. In Canada mostly children attend public 77． _______
schools. Public schools are mainly fou
nd by governments 78． ________
through tax income. Students in Canada taught in 79． _______
English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．________
attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．__________
paying by parents. By law, the children must attend 82．__________
the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different 83． _________
levels in the Canadian education system .The first was 84．______
called Elementary Schools, which include kindergartens 85．___________
through grade 7 or 8.
第二节短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断∶
如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改正∶
该行多一个词∶把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词∶在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意∶原行没有错的不要改。
Get a good education is more important today than 76． __________
ever before. In Canada mostly children attend public 77． __________
schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments 78． ________
through tax income. Students in Canada taught in 79． _________
English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．_______
attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．_______
paying by parents. By law, the children must attend 82．_____
the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different 83． ________
levels in the Canadian education system .The first was 84．_____
called Elementary Schools, which include kindergartens 85．________
through grade 7 or 8.
第二节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
That afternoon we didn’t go out, we didn’t take a walk as usually. 76. ________
We stayed at home because of the weather was rainy, windy and cold. 77. ________
We sat in the living room. My aunt had her child around her. 78. ________
Mary, Tom and John sat near their mother, that was resting on 79. ________
a couch. I sat alone. They don’t want me near them. My aunt had 80. ________
never liked me. She let me live with her, but she was always 81. ________
unkind to me. Her children—my cousins—were cruel for me. 82. ________
I was a poor orphan, only ten years old. I had friends. Nobody 83. ________
wanted me. I went into the next room. Here there was a bookcase
full of interested books. I chose a book that was full of pictures. 84. ________
I began to read. Read made me forget all my troubles. 85. ________
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My best friend Li Hua gives me a call this morning. 71.
She said it was her birthday and she would have a 72.
birthday party. I promised that I would go. But I went 73.
shopping this afternoon and bought a doll as his 74.
birthday present. I arrived her home at six o’clock 75.
on the evening. Many of her friends had already arrived. 76.
On the table was a big beautiful cake with 14 candle lit. 77.
Li Hua made wish and blew off all the candles. We all 78.
shouted with greatly joy. However, I didn’t see her parents. 79.
We had a great time, but I think it would be more better if 80.
we celebrate our birthdays with our parents.
第II卷(共35分)
第四部分: 写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节: 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Kate,
Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats 76. ________
me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions. 77. ________
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 78. ________
leaving things lying around the house while he did this 79. ________
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80. ________
follow. But he often says, “Doing as I say, not as I do.” 81. ________
Even worse, he point out my past mistakes to guests, 82. ________
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t 83. _______
bear what he does. I have been tried many times 84. ________
to to talk with he but he never listens. Please help me. 85. ________
Yours,
Jane
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