假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. While we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant, we selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show it to my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put it on. But we were annoying to find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem. To my satisfactions, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling contently. How delighted I was!
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I went out to see a film with my brother after
supper. On our way to the cinema, we meet an American 76.____________
girl naming Alice. She got lost and looked very 77.____________
anxious. We went up to see that was the matter. We 78.____________
then took him to the hotel. While going there, I 79.____________
told her the great changes that had been taken place 80.____________
in our country in the past few years, Alice told 81.____________
us a lot about the youth in America. 82.____________
Although we missed the film, we felt very happily, 83.____________
for we not only helped Alice get out of troubles, 84.____________
but also knew something abut the America. We see English
can strength understanding and friendship. 85.____________
第二卷
第一节 短文改错（10×1分）
Between Virginia and Maryland on the Potomac River lie 76. _______
Washington D.C. It is about 220 miles in the south 77. ______
of New York City. The pleasantest and easiest ways to 78 ______
get there is by long-distance bus, or by the fast
(125-mile-an-hour) train which spends a little more money than 79. ______
the bus journey and a little less money than flying. I could travel far
more than 220 miles to see Washington. It’s not city that has 80. ______
been grown up accidently as most big cities have done. 81. ______
It was carefully planned for the nation’s capital by a 82. ______
Frenchman, Perril Enfant. The city was named 83. ______
George Washington, the much-loved, much-admired,
much-respected first president of the United States. 84. ______
In 1791 he himself arranged to buy the land which it stands. 85. ______
第二卷
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35）
短文改错（共10小题，满分10分）
Persistence is the inner strenth for stick 76_________
it out when you would rather quit.Most true 77_________
successful people endure a lot failure 78_________
before they achieve success.J.K.Rowling
was snubbed(怠慢）by dozens of publishers after 79_________
she hit it big with the Harry Potter series 80_________
Oprah Winfrey was fired because of somebody 81_________
decided she "wasn't fit for TV."It is okay
to fail as long as you see the lesson in every 82_________
mistake you make and use them to become
even strong. Persistence means changing 83_________
"I can't" into "I will"--and continue to 84_________
believe yourself no matter what. 85_________
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第三部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（P）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
According to a survey, quite few junior and senior students 76.______
visit Internet bars frequent. They are there mainly to play games. 77.______
Worse still，many of whom even look at some unhealthy pictures. 78.______
Some of the students sometimes stayed in the bar for a whole night. 79.______
All these have a bad effect not only on their studies but also 80.______
on their health. And it is no doubt that Net bars do no good to 81.______
students. I think students should make the full use of time, work 82.______
hard at their lessons and try their best to gain more knowledges 83.______
in order to have a bright future. I’m sincerely called on these 84.______
students who are addicted to Net bars to keep far away from it. 85.______
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The students of Class 3 have a discussion about if it is necessary learn English from childhood. Some think it necessary. As a little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn many English words by hearts, what will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Children have to learn Chinese Pinyin. If they study Chinese Pinyin or English at the same time, it will be very easily for them to mix them up. This would do a lot of harm with their learning. In short, the students have not reached any agreement still.
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