假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour.They reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and watered flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter(垃圾) leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. The group where I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground. All of us worked hardly.Before noon we finished working. Each of us feel a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After supper Liu Wei came and ask me to go and see a film with him.In our way to the cinema,we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying.We bought her a cake to stop her cry.When we asked she lived,she said she did not know.So we took him to the police station and asked the polices to take care of her.After that we went to the cinema.And when we got there,the movie was almost over.Although we missed the movie,but we felt very happy because we did a well deed.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday I paid a visit to the Hong’en Temple Park with my friends. The park was full of fresh and beauty flowers. When I was enjoying the wonderful scenery around, something unpleasant catch my eye. A young couple on the grass was eating, talking and laughing loudly even if they were the only people in the world. What’s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish onto the grass, ignoring the sign “No littering” nearby. What a shame!
So behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Hong’en Temple Park do as the young couples did, the park will be severely polluting and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think both of us should mind our behavior in the public places. Only in this way can we live more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
书面表达（共三节，满分30分）
第一节：单句改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）Art is influenced by customs and faith of a people. Styles in Western art have changed many times.
Some of the first poetry a young child learns in English are nursery rhymes.
My first visit was a space station considered the most modern in space.
To prevent this from happening again, John Snow suggested that the source of all the water supplies examined.
Copernicus' theory is now the basis which all our ideas of the universe are built.
He did not want to be attacked by the Christian Church, so he only published it as he lay die in 1543.
It is an imaginary line divide the eastern and western halves of the world and is very useful for navigation.
Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting the Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris.
With so many different forms of poetry to choose, students may eventually want to write poems of their own.
The second theory suggested that people should absorbed this disease into their bodies with their meals.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.
Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.
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