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Dear Joe,
I’m sorry to hear that you want to give up apply for a volunteer for the 2013 National
Games. In my opinion, you’d better not give up this idea.
On the one hand, you have many advantage. First of all, you are good at communicating
others and ready to help others. In addition to, you are familiar with Shenyang. Secondly, be
a volunteer can broaden your outlook and improved yourself, that will be beneficial to your
future work and life. Therefore, I sincere hope you can seize this chance and try your best to
be a outstanding volunteer. Please consider my advice. I’m really looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Jane
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