假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^ ）并在其下面写出该添加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to another, look for the clothes we would wear in the contest．While the rest of us was enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting．Finally she found the suitable clothes．Deeply moving by what she did, we tried our best but won the first prize in the contest．Li Yue is always cares about the class．She often devotes her spare time in helping others．She has set good example to us．Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from him．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Luo Ming looked sadly today. When I asked about her the reason, she said that winter vacation was going to be over soon and that she had to go back to school. Luo Ming doesn’t do well in her studies but she isn’t interested in studying. I guess that’s how she doesn’t want to go back to school. But I look forward to go back to school. I enjoy studying very much. It helps enrich her knowledge. After relaxing for more than twenty day in the cold winter, now I was full of energy and can’t wait to study in the classroom again. I hope Luo Ming will one day find the fun of studying, either.
My hometown is a pretty city，so people there are
kind and polite. With coming of spring，grass and
trees turn green，and flowers grew in many colors.
In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more
beautiful. After autumn arrives，the city looks as an
old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter，
a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I can
wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long
time. While they find fish come to the surface, they
fly down immediate and catch them without delay.
That is my city, and I love it so much.
文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的单词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错误的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的单词。
Dear Li Ming ,
I’m glad to hear for you . You asked me what friendship was . Here are some my thoughts .
First , I think , as a friend , we can brave , loyal and active . Most importantly , true friends should be honest and helpful each other . But sometimes trouble can break down friendship , such as misunderstanding , arguments , fight and so on . If a closely friend hurts you and you don’t understand , don’t angry with him , try your best deal with these problems .
Secondly , in my opinion , a good friend is wealth in someone life .
Finally , true friends should share happiness and sorrow . A good friend is someone who make me happy , too .
I hope you will find true friends .
Yours
Xiao Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day．She liked it at once．
Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it．As she did this, lots of tea
splashed（溅）on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister
wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us．It
was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake．The assistant
was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny.
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
Yesterday I attended a classmate party．I was very happy to see my old friends, that I hadn’t met for years．So I drank a lot．After the party, I drive home though my classmate had tried to persuade me not to．I always believed that as a skilled driver, drinking a little did no harm to driving．On the way to home, the wine began to take effect．All of sudden, I cracked my car against a sign on the road．Luckily, a policeman came towards me．He fined me and said: “Drunk driving is a terribly thing．You can end up hurt yourself, and other innocent people life．” Till then, I realized that the effects of drunk driving could be deadly for all those involved．Many people who drink and drive do not think of the serious consequences of their action unless it is too late．So I appeal to everybody never to drink and drive! Cherish your life!
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