假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的添加、删除或修改。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful , and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
That Saturday when I entered into an underpass, I 86．
heard a beautiful sound. It makes me very happy. 87．
It was darkness there, but I could judge where the sound 88．
came. I walked towards a corner. An old man was sitting 89．
there, wears shabby clothes. He was playing erhu, “Oh, it is 90．
a beggar,” I thought. On that moment a man came by and dropped 91．
one Yuan in the beggar box. The old man stopped 92．
to say “Thank you”. He then groped (摸) on the ground. 93．
While he found the box, he picked up the money. He felt 94．
it and smiled. What beautiful the music was! It was 95．
played by a blind person. I just admired him.
短文改错（共１０小题，每小题1.5分，满分１5分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory. 76. ____________
But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77. ____________
to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78. ____________
saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79. ____________
like to have. One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80. ____________
was looking for a job, too. This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81. ____________
when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82. ____________
address to your present boss as I have been trying to find 83. ____________
a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84. ____________
he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish. 85. ____________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（∨）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错
| Nowadays more and more people are sending their children, even middle school children, overseas for farther study. Some people think their |
66 |
| children can receive a better education and learn foreign language |
67 |
| as well. The most valuable thing is what they can learn to depend |
68 |
| on themselves and improving their understanding of the world. |
69 |
| But some people are not in favour for this. They think studying |
70 |
| abroad cost over ten times as much money as in China. Besides, |
71 |
| children are too young to take care of them. Many parents |
72 |
| worry the safety of their children. What’s more, they might follow bad |
73 |
| examples. In my opinion, the government should set up various schools |
74 |
| and colleges to meet with the needs of people. |
75 |
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线
上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Carlos was born in Manila in 1950, at the age of two 76．_________________
week he was taken by his father, a musician, to the United 77．_________________
States by the sea. He spent his first ten years in the American 78．_________________
Southland that he attended school. Between the ages of 10 and 18, 79．_________________
he travelled in the Southern and Western Atlantic areas, living in 80．_________________
Florida and had graduated from his school in 1968. Early in his life 81．_________________
he had a great interested in music instruments and in 1965, he 82．_________________
learned to play the piano and quick became an expert on it. 83．_________________
Since he graduation from Florida State University in 1973. 84．_________________
he has been a famous pianist. He is not marry, saying that 85．_________________
his music school comes first.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正短文的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上打一个勾（∨）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错
| In a national spelling contest in America, 11-year-old |
76._________ |
| girl was asked to spell a certain word. But with her softly |
77. _________ |
| voice the judges were sure if she spelled the word with letter |
78. _________ |
| A and E . They talked it over and finally decided to simply |
79. _________ |
| ask her what she had said. Immediately the girl knew he had |
80. _________ |
| mis-spelled the word. But instead of lying and told the judges |
81. _________ |
| she had said the correct letter, she told the truth which |
82. _________ |
| she had said the wrong letter, so she had lost the contest. |
83. _________ |
| As the girl walked off the stage, the audience stood |
84. _________ |
| to their foot clapping to applaud her honesty. |
85. _________ |
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