假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.
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The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water.
One of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it's water, we still would have enough water.
此题要求改正所给句中的错误。每句均有一处错。
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^，在^下写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在 横线下写出改正后的词。It spent me about 10 minutes to solve the problem
Talk to my friends about my problems often makes me relaxed
With time goes by，I become more and more confident
This was the first time I have seen him
Not only he but also his parents likes that game.
He was put into the prison sixteen times for organizing protests.
Jane is still in hospital, but she’s making a rapid progress.
The way he did it was different from that we were used to .
We were about to do our homework while the light went out.
I can't stand some people laugh at others in public places
My mother is a village woman, that is already in her fifties. She has a little education, but she knows knowledge is of greatly importance to young people. She often asks me how I get along for my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother do everything she can for me so that I can spend more time on my studies. Once she was badly ill and had stayed in bed for several day. When I got home, I found the light was still on and my mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. Such is my mother, a kind but hard-working woman.
Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel dizzy or tiring, some have no appetite for food and other even suffer from sleep problems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they get rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, it’s important to make a careful plan in advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the pressure. Besides, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldn’t stay too late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to perform well in an exam. what’s more, a balanced diet can contribute to their perform in exams. They are supposed to eating various food such as eggs, milk, carrots, walnuts, etc.
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
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