假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换个性作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除、或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号
，并在其下面写出该加的单词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误以及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者从（第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mom,
Mother’s Day is coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers. Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But today, at this special time, I just want tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by giving me life. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may not often say it, but I do love you. Nobody is much important than you in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Here I sincere hope you will be happy and healthy forever !
I`m looking forward to hear from you very often.
Your little girl,
Jennifer
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may be often feel lonely. That’s why you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices below.
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will always ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, when I can introduce you to others.
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter
I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years before. It was really huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eye. Later on, unlike other girls, I was volunteered to go waterskiing alone. I took on the life jacket, got off the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possibly.
The lake seemed broad and endless. I was so exciting to appreciate the beauty of the mountains and waters that I speed my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found me in the middle of the endless lake. I really enjoyed the unforgettable experience!
It was a chance of a lifetime to win first________
prize on the Story Writing Show.All I had to do________
was to write a story or present it.My teachers________
have been telling me how great my writing was. ________
So if they had said was true，I would have a chance________
of winning the prize.What were better，I had useful________
help.There was Uncle Chen，gentleman living________
near my house，who was a very much famous writer. ________
He agreed to reading my story and give me some________
advices on how to write like a real writer. ________
Today is Sunday.I’ve been in Canada for two months.
This is the first time that I’ve been away my family for such a________
long time.With the help of Katia，a roommate of me，I’ve________
soon got used to live without my parents around.Katia，like________
many other Russian girls，are nice and lively.We became________
friends shortly after we meet each other.Although her English________
is a little hardly to understand，we enjoy chatting and we________
usually talk a lot about our own family.We’re both surprised________
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different.Now，________
we’re planning a small party for the next Sunday.There，Katia________
will introduce me to some of her friends，one of who has been________
to China several times.I just can’t wait.
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday the student of our class made a bike trip to Furong, a small town by the Nanxi River. We set off earlier in the morning. After get to the town, we visited some places of interest.
At noon, we had a picnic near the river. Everybody is attracted by the beautiful scenery but we took a lot pictures. In the afternoon, some of them went fishing, some flew kites, and the others rowed boats on the water. We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip for us, during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help. We have learned to help, understanding and share with others.
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