假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
I love camping. It’s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation. Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day. We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp, and what I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断∶
如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改：
该行多一个词∶把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词∶在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意∶原行没有错的不要改。 （请在答题卡的指定位置作答。）
With the summer vacation coming around, many school ______________
leavers feel it the great chance to enjoy themselves. Most ______________
of my classmate have plans to travel, which can broaden ______________
their views and add up to their life experience. There are ______________
also some students would like to work as volunteers in ______________
the communities. Beside, quite a few students want to learn ______________
to drive, dance or cook with attending summer classes. ______________
As for me, I am looking forward to spend this precious time ______________
with my family before I left for my college. Hopefully, I can ______________
do something in return for our parents' love and care. ______________
短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else in need.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.
Most parents in China hope his single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict
in their children. So do teachers! Many children are given so much homework that they had
hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do nothing but study. No
wonder so many children are tiring of lessons. I believe many people have already read this kind
of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from those events? Now the
government is carrying out of a plan to solve these education problem.
Most parents in China hope his single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict
in their children. So do teachers! Many children are given so much homework that they had
hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do nothing but study. No
wonder so many children are tiring of lessons. I believe many people have already read this kind
of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from those events? Now the
government is carrying out of a plan to solve these education problem.
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