假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, my whole family went to climb the big hill. My father and mother told my elder
sister and I that the first one to get to the top of the hill would be give a toy. Hear this, we
began to run up. At first I kept ahead, but a few minute later my sister was ahead me.
However, I didn’t give up. I reached the top firstly in the end. We enjoy the beautiful
scenery and had a picnic on the top of the hill. I was the most happiest one all the time,
because I not only won a toy and also learnt that one shouldn’t give up easily.
每句中最多有一处错误。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在改句后面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该句后面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；She could hardly afford for the medical care.
Now people get a lot of informations from TV.
Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down.
There were too many nice things that I didn’t know what to choose.
We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago.
Some parents think useless for girls to go to school.
I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.
Filling with many people, the room is crowded.
She was a child star and began to perform in the age of four.
It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my MP3 player. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to pay my attention on my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is true which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is know to us all, paper burns easy. Yesterday, Mike, a six-year-old boy, made a paper box and then filled it for water. He then lit a candle and tries to burn the paper box. Much to his surprises, the paper box didn’t catch fire. Such curious was the child about the experiment that he asked his father endless questions about it. His father, which is a teacher in a primary school, didn’t know how to ask these questions, but he didn’t pretend to understand. He did everything he could help his son solve the problem. This experience made Mike interesting in the study of modern science.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有2处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不算分.
It is interested to visit another country， but sometimes there are some questions if we don’t know the language very well． It may be difficult to talk about the people
there．We may not know how to use the telephone in the country which are visiting． We may not know what to buy the things we need． In a strange country, we may not know where to eat and what to order in a restaurant． It is not easy to decide how many money to tip（付小费） waiters or taxi drivers． When we were helpless， we may not know how to ask help．After a short time later， however， we learn what to do and what to say and we learn to enjoy life in another country.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a boy grown up in India，I had longed to traveling abroad. I used to listen to the stories my father told me about her stay in Canada and trips to Europe in1970s. My big moment finally come in the summer of 1998 when I was able to accompany my parents to Europe, where my father was to attend for a meeting. The service during the flight to Frankfurt was such nice that even today I can still remember them. The flight was really smooth and thorough enjoyable，even someone as me, who is otherwise scared of flying.
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