假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After school I went to home for supper. When I got home, I found my mother laying in bed，she was ill. Unluckily, my father was away from home in business. “What shall I do?” I thought to me. Since Mother was ill, I must take well care of her. So I decided to try cooking by myself. I did the cooking with great difficulty but it got burnt at last. I had thought Mother would never like. To my joy, Mother praised me for the meat I have cooked. She said, “It tastes delicious. I’m very pleasing with it.” I knew Mother was encouraging us to do more by myself.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短句中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误中涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改的词
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次
2.只允许修改10处，多者 从第11处起 不计分
Last Saturday, I wanted very much to see a film together with my brother after supper.on my way to the cinema, we happen to meet an American named Peter,who had lost his way,Looked worried.
when he told us that he wasn’t able to find the hotel,we decided take him there.when we went to the hotel,we told of Peter the great changes that had taken place in our country in the past few year,and hen told us a lot of things about the youths in the U.S.A.
Although my brother and I missed a interesting film, we felt very happily.for we ha not only helped Peter out of trouble and also learnt something by him.
下面短文中共有10处错误,每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删
除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning. I’d like to
come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. They were very old and unluckily
they are not in a good health recently. My mother has already made a telephone calling to them
and promised visit them with me this Saturday. My mother said we will stay at m
y grandparents’
the whole weekend. So I’m real sorry I can’t attend your party. I do hope you will understand all
this. Here I wish you a lot fun on your birthday and many happy returns of the day.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral English but learn more about other cultures. There were two foreign teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that we can have a chance to practise a lang
uage. I seize every chance to talk them. However, I sometime find they are not so interesting in what I say, and it’s hard for I to choose a suitable topic. I would like some advices about how to communicate proper with foreigners, and what topics to pick.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the summer holiday, I think I should do something meaningful instead touring. So I got a job in a fast food restaurant and worked there as cleaner. I worked seven hours a day. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, that made me so tired tha
t I nearly stopped it halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determinations. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and went to home late in the evening. Finally, I finished the job after the new school term began. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really a successful experience, which is worthy remembering for ever.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tony,
Thank you for your letter. To tell you the truth, I’ve thought a lot of about whether you
should buy a laptop computer help you with your study. In my opinion, you’d better not. For
one reason, it’s very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it, such as playing
computer games, see movies and so on, which will be a waste of time. For other reason, buying a
laptop computer don’t mean you can study well. If you want to make a progress, you need to put
your heart into your study but work hard. Whether you had a computer or not is not the most
important. Do you agree to me? Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua
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