假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m good at all the subjects, and always ready help others. At school I get along well with my classmates. Therefore，I have a problem that troubles myself all the time. It’s the relationship among my desk mate and me. He is a hardworking student, who keeps school rule well. But he’s a person with few words. What’s more，he got angry easily. I don’t know what to deal with him. Maybe it’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings or thoughts. I value our friendship. I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better. I do hope we will be closer to each other than before.
We're now living in an information 4ge, m that TV, cell ________
phones and the Web are wide used．It seems that many people ________
cannot enjoy them without them．However, if I had to give _______
up one of them, I will turn off the TV ratter than switch off ________
my ceil phone and cut off the Internet．I could do without TV _______
because few show take my fancy and there're too many commercials．_______
Besides, most programs on the TV are also available elsewhere． _______
As for cell phones and the Web, they are more necessary to me． _______
I need a cell phone to keep touch with m> friends and family, and ________
almost all information can be gather on the Internet． _______
短文改错（共10小题，每题1.5分，满分15分）
The village was always very quietly .The people living ______
there were busy about working in their fields during the ______
day and went to bed early at night, tiring after a ______
long day ’s hard work. All of them had lived in a __
village for all their life and had never left for less than ______
one day at a time. On these days how they left, they got ___
up early in the morning .They filled with their cart of _____
fruit ,vegetables and sheeps, and went to the _______
market in the town beyond their valley .They come _______
back in the evening with some money and perhaps a ____
present for their children. That was their life－hard and
simple, but not unhappy
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two American．I became their guide．First, we went to the Shouxi River．They wanted to look around the river by the boat．After buy the tickets, we got into a boat．We went around seeing the beautiful sight．After that, we went shopping．The sellers couldn't spoke English．Though it was very harder, I tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences．They bought some little things with their help．Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures．When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch．After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history．www．
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ＾), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot, but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to
catch it, big drop of rain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder and harder. Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
短文改错
My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the
ticket window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park，I
was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.
Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him，but I had no
luck.Wandering in the park，I felt alone without any companions.Worse still，I had no money，so
I had to walk home，covered as much as 5 kilometers.
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