假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
Dear editor,
I’m a student come from a remote and poor village. Let me share you a touching story about my teacher, Ren Ying, which is in a wheelchair. She caught a serious disease and lose her ability to move in 1986, but she failed the college entrance examinations because of the handicap. After attempt suicide twice, she began self-study. Later, she run a school for children in the village. He has been a teacher and a headmaster for 12 years. Now our school has 6 grade and 200 students.
Yours,
LiHua
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则改正：注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Life on earth depends the sun. Day after 1. _______
day we see its light and feel its warm， but we 2. _______
do not often consider about its origin. 3. _______
Yet there are many remarkable things about the 4. _______
sun. One is their distance from the earth. Even 5. _______
if it could be made,a trip to the sun would spend a long 6. _______
time even by the fastest rocket. 7. _______
The sun is a large satellite. The planet 8. _______
earth is very small in comparison. The sun make 9. _______
us to feel hot， even at a distance of 93 million miles. 10. ______
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则改正：注意：原行没有错的不要改。
After I finished the school this year，I began to 1. _______
look for work. Now several month later， I still hadn't 2. _______
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning 3. _______
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4. _______
He said to me on the phone， "I hear you do very 5. _______
well in your studies. I may provide a job for you." I entered 6. _______
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7. _______
will go through the job -hunting talk today and he would8. _______
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised， 9. _______
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. 10. ______
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则改正：注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Once an old man saw a bag on his way to home. 1. _______
In the bag there was a wolf. It was catching and put in 2. _______
the bag by a shepherd（牧羊人） a few minutes ago.
The wolf asked the old man to let him out. 3. _______
The old man took pity on him and opened bag. 4. _______
When the wolf got out， said to the old man， "I am very hungry. 5. _______
I want to eat you." The other old man could do nothing 6. _______
and cry for help. Just then the shepherd came and saw this. 7. _______
He beat the wolf to death by a stick. Then he said to the 8. _______
old man， "wolves want to eat men all the time. It's nature 9. _______
will never change. We should took this as a good lesson." 10. ______
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则改正：注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Sir，
I'm glad to recommend （推荐） to you my friend Li Ming.
Li Ming was born on July 15， in 1974 in Beijing. 1. _______
He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986. 2. _______
When he was in the middle school， he did good in maths， 3. _______
physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating 4. _______
from No.4 High School， he entered into Beijing 5. _______
University study physics. After four years of hard 6. _______
work there， he went to the United States for farther 7. _______
study. Because of his excellent work， he get a doctor's 8. _______
degree in physics this year.He is now in good health
but would like to make contributions to our 9. _______
country. I should be most grateful if you would favorably consider my recommendation.
Looking forward to receive your early reply. 10. ______
Yours truly，Wang Li
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则改正：注意：原行没有错的不要改。
The other day my brother Tom was beginning his 1. _______
motorbike then our neighbor， Mary came out and asked 2. _______
him if he was going near the station. So he offered her a lift.
She got at the back of the motorbike and 3. _______
they drove away. Just before they reached to the station 4. _______
a policeman waved to them to stop. "Excuse me， sir，" he said.
"You are not sitting on that motorbike properly."
"What's matter with the way I'm sitting？" my brother 5. _______
asked in surprise. "Not you，sir. It's a young lady，" said 6. _______
the policeman. "In this country side-saddle（偏座） is not 7. _______
permitted when one ride a motorbike." Mary made an excuse 8. _______
that she was from Italy， where it isn't considering to 9. _______
break the law when people take the side-saddle.
The policeman shook head and drove away. 10. ______
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