假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was the amcompletely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday evening. on |
My friend Li Hua come to visit me on May Day. During the following days I showed he
around the city of Hangzhou. We went to the Museum in the morning of May 2, and we
learned many about the history of Zhejiang. In the afternoon, we made a tour to West Lake. It
was really great funny! In the evening I took Li Hua to the night zoo there. It was too
interesting to see animal at night. The next day we went to the bookshop to buy books.
Though we were very tiring in those two days, but we enjoyed ourselves very much.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Docto
rs examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改词。
It is real a good chance to have all of you here. ____________
We have spent several precious weekend in learning __________
in the English Club. Because we have been members ___________
for a short period of time, we have made a great progress. ___________
That is because we are all very much active and the __________
activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, ___________
the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make____________
the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say ___________
that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I ____________
am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future.___________
Jimmy lives in London and began swimming a few months ago.
He likes swimming, and often goes to the swimming pool near by his_____
house with his mother and swims there for a hour or so. ______
He was six year old last week, and his mother said, “You ______
swim quite good now, but you have never seen the sea, my _____
child, haven’t you? Your father and I are going to take you _____
there on Saturday, and you are going to swimming in the sea. _______
It isn’t cold now, and it’s much nice than a swimming pool.” _____
Jimmy’s father and mother brought him to the sea in their _______
car on Saturday, but they stopped at the side of a small ________
harbor(港口). Jimmy got out and looked at the sea for long ______
time, but wasn’t happy. Then he said to his mother,
“Which is the shallow end, mother?”.
As the College Entrance Examination is drawing nearby, some students would rather expect
good luck than to make every effort to study．They think success results good luck．Whether they can be admitted to key universities depend on luck．However, others insist that diligence is a mother of success．Only by working hard can they achieve what they want．Since they fail sometimes, they don’t give up, for they believe that success lies in our own hands．As for me, I’m in favor of the latter opinion．Luck doesn’t come alone．It goes hand by hand with hard working．Sometimes, some students are lucky enough to succeed, but such luck won’t last long because it is not basing on their own abilities．
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出应加的单词。
此行错一个词：在错词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的单词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改。
My classmate，Joseph，is at present in hospital
with a breaking leg．He was walking to school the other 1．
day when he let a bicycle ran right into him．He never 2．
watches where he is going，so he often gets into the trouble． 3．
But he is having a nice time there．He has a comfortable 4．
room，patiently nurses，and a great deal of time to read． 5．
Some friends of his go to see him every day，they take him 6．
lots of good book and fresh fruit．He is not losing any time 7．
from school because he is busy study what he has 8．
missed in class．The doctor says he is recovering fast than 9．
expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks． 10．
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