假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ＾), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot, but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to
catch it, big drop of rain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder and harder. Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉.
此行缺一个词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 在该行右边横线上写该加的词.
此行错一个词: 在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词.
注意: 原行没有错的不要改.
Mary was an university student. She didn’t have much _________
money and her parents were not rich, and she had an uncle .________
who had been fortunate enough to collect great wealthy. ._________
He always gave her valuable Christmas and birthday present. _________
When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary want to buy him ._________
something real special, but because he was rich, she did not ._________
know how to get him. She went into the best shop in her _________
town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful ._________
shop assistants. Finally she asked, “What do you have for ._________
someone who has already got everything she wants or needs to ?” _________
The assistant sighed deeply and answered, “envy, only envy.”
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八
），并在其—F面写山该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其卜面写山修改斤的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I see your advertisement in a student magazine and I'm interesting to know more about you diving courses. First of all, I should explain that although I can swim I'm not very confident in the water. But you mentioned your advertisement that your instructors are full qualified. Thus I believe they'll be able to teach someone as me to dive. I have one week's holiday in the three week of June and would like to know th
at if there’s a course running at that time. How much does a week's course worth? Finally, if I decide to go ahead, are there any special equipment I need to buy or is everything provided by your company?
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it . As she did this , lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt.. I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face. My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us .It was turned out to be her own cup, that she had left on the shelf be mistake. The assist
ant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny.
下面短文中共有10处错误，每句中
最多有两处，请你对其进行修改。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Joe,
I’m back at school now. Thank you very much for the wonderfully week I spent with you and your family. During the week you teach me how to swim, boat or fish. I really appreciate your taking me around your place and I really enjoyed me. Your mother is such good cook that I think I must have put on nearly 3 kilogram in just one week. I’ll remember forever the seven happy days when we spent together. I did hope you’ll be able to visit our school sometimes next summer. Thank you again. Let’s keep in touch with. Remember me to your family.
Shirley
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I used to be a loser and everything which I did always had wrong. During that time, I was extreme disappointed with myself. I couldn’t do everything well however how easy it was. In the meantime, an old friend of me encouraged me to stand up again and told me that I was still young enough to try more times. I took his advices and made a great effort to achieve something. Then I found I could do things much more better. Now I not longer think I am a loser. I determined to do everything well.
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