假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Mr Anderson,
I’m not sure whether you can remember me,and we met in Bethany last
year．It was at your daughter wedding．You and me had a pleasant talk and I
told you a little about my job as reporter for the New York Times．At that
time I do like to stay in New York,but now I’d like to get a job back in my
town．My problem is that have been away for a longer time that I have not
some job contacts（关系） in Bethany．That’s why I’m writing for you ．I
would appreciate if you could put me in touch with anyone who could help
me and advise me．
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
Mr. Smith had neither wife nor children. He liked nothing but drinking. He almost spent all of his money with drinks. Sometimes he went hungry, but he had to borrow some money to buy some food. One evening he met a friend of him in the street. The man invited him to have dinner in a restaurant. He was very happy that he drank too much. His friend stopped a taxi and ask the driver to take him home. Soon they reached in the door of his house. The driver drove away. But Mr. Smith couldn't insert the key into the keyhole. Just then a policeman went up, offering to help him but he refused, saying “The house is circled now. If you can keep it moving, I can open the door.”
Yesterday I go shopping in the supermarket. As I was looking at the goods I noticed a old man who seemed to be following me wherever I went. As I moved, there he was, smiled at me. I wondered that if I had done something wrong. But I didn't think I had. So I believed there must be anything wrong with him. I became a bit scared. At the food section I selecting the chicken when I felt a tap on the shoulders. Turn around, I saw that it was the same man. "Lady," he final said, "youhave my shopping basket." At that moment I realized I misunderstood him, so I said sorry for him at once.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ken,
I’m very exciting to have received an e-mail from you and I’m glad you had a wonderfully time during the past summer holiday. Last summer I take a trip to the countryside with some of my friend. Country life, in my opinion, gave me peace and quite, which is what I can’t enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that we went swimming every now and then. You can never imagine how fun it was to swim together with friends in the cool, clean river on such hot days. In fact, I had never been had a better holiday before. I took plenty photos there and I keep them where I can see them every day as they always reminds me of my stay in the country。
Yours
Li Ping
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
1.该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。
2.该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
3.该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,
I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned
home safe and sound. When thinking of the wonderful day ______________
I spent in New Orleans, I just can’t help think of both of______________
you. It was very kind for you to have provided everything______________
to make my stay there such happy experience. I’ve______________
learned so many, not only English but also culture. And I______________
really enjoy a great deal, the fun and laughter that we shared______________
them with each other. Thank you very much. I’ll always______________
remember this trip as well as your kind.______________
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you. I’ll be very ______________
glad to show you around. And you’ll surely have a pleased______________
visit here.
I’ll keep in touch and write you later. Please take care!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(___)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible
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