五、写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Li Ming，
I have received your letter just now. Don't worry about me. 76．______
I'm getting on well with my research works in the lab. But, 77．______
to my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. 78．______
The reason is that you have not done well in it recent 79．______
and you have lost interesting, I'm afraid I can't agree with 80．______
you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English 81．______
is widely used in the world today and it will be important 82．______
tool in your future work.Except, it is becoming more 83．______
and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, and 84．______
you will succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there 85．______
is a way, I'm looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Yours LiuDong
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tony,
Thank you for your letter. To tell you the truth, I’ve thought a lot of about whether you
should buy a laptop computer help you with your study. In my opinion, you’d better not. For
one reason, it’s very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it, such as playing
computer games, see movies and so on, which will be a waste of time. For other reason, buying a
laptop computer don’t mean you can study well. If you want to make a progress, you need to put
your heart into your study but work hard. Whether you had a computer or not is not the most
important. Do you agree to me? Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处
错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Before Louis the Eleventh became king, he used to visiting a peasant where garden produced excellent fruit. After he takes office, the peasant brought him as a present a very large apple which had grown in his garden. The king, remembering the pleasant times that he had spent under the old man’s roof, gave him a thousand of crowns(25便士). The lord of the village, heard of this, thought that if one who gave a common apple received so large a reward, one giving a really valuable present would receive a much large reward. He, however, offered a splendid horse. The king accepted it and thinking of a big apple, said, “This cost me a lot of money; I now give to you in return for your horse.”
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Edison was a great scientist or inventor. As may not be known to many people, born in a
peasant families, he received few school education. He started to go to school at age of eight
and remain at school for only three months. It’s said that he always asked some strange
questions which his teachers couldn’t answer them. In fact, he was a man full with
imagination. He made over 2,000 inventions in his life, covered many fields, such as the
electric lamp, film, etc. He made an important contribution for the whole world, the social
develop and the progr
ess of human beings.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
请在答题卡上作答。
Last winter vacation，some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends，while I chose
to take part-time job to gain experience and earn some money. I learned from my teacher that a
nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addresses on
envelope. The pay were 10 cents per envelope．I headed for the company，feeling sure I would
easy finish 300 envelopes in five hours and to earn the money．At fact, I only finished 200．Now，
I fully understand how hard is to earn money．Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our English club was set up two months ago．Now，we have members of 25．We met once a week on Saturday afternoon．So far，we have been conducted a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films，including a Christmas party and get together with the foreign students．Last week we held an English story－telling competition．We required that the entries would be original and interesting and be presented i
n English within five minutes．Every member took an actively part in it．Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judge．At last，LiBing won the first place．Many members said that the activity benefited them many ways．
Not only did it improve their speaking English，but also it brought them more fun．They hope many such activities can be held．
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