第四部分写作(共两节, 满分35 分)
第一节短文改错
下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分； 3. 改错在原文上改
Dear David,
Having been seen the notice on the Internet, I know you want to make friends in our country so as to learning Chinese and Chinese culture as well. I’m very glad to be your friends. Nowadays I am studied in a senior school. I can help you learn China and Chinese culture in some ways. If you will come here, we’ll stay together so that you’ll have chances to practice speaking and listening Chinese, at the same time I can learn English. I’ll show you around some famous attractions such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace for which you can have a good knowledge about Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A survey basing on 1,000 
students found that 80% of senior students slept less than
nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main
cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while
doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is some
students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.
Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,
teachers should encourage their students make good use of their spare time.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
After supper Liu Wei came and ask me to go and see a film with him. In our way to the cinema, we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her cry. When we asked she lived, she said she did not know. So we took him to the police station and asked the polices to take care of her. After that we went to the cinema. And when we got there, the movie was almost over. Although we missed the movie, but we felt very happy because we did a well deed.
Time flies as an arrow. I’m already in the second half of senior Grade 3 before I realized it. it
is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school. At the present. I’m busy
review my lesson in order to take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to Beijing
Universiv, that is one of the best university not only in China but also in the world. I’ll try my best
to turn my dream into reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize our
wishes I do believe everyone will able to enter a very good university and college
.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该增加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正的词。
注意：1. 原行没有错的不要改；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Li is a well-known doctor in our city. Kind but patient, he is always ready to do what he can help his patients. One day he learned from the medical magazine that patients will feel more pain if pleasant music is played to them. Soon he got an office in his own. So he decided to have beautifully music playing in his waiting-room. However, on one morning, an old lady who was sitting in the crowded waiting room became angry while listen to the music. She said, “We were all waiting to see the doctor, but he’s just playing the violin in his office instead of doing her work.”
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
1. 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜 线划掉。
2. 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
3. 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出
It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High ___________
School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a _______
get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It
was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody _________
and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed
this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent
together and the people they were familiar with. It was
a pity which some of us were not present as they had
gone abroad for further studies, but they called back
or sent greeting card from different places.
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