假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Bill enjoyed shoot very much, but he was never good at it．One day his friend was named
Jack visited his house and saw a new target Bill had put several days ago in his garden．Jack
went nearer but saw a hole in the middle of the target．When jack asked who had shot at it,
Bill said he had．“How far away are you? Two feet?” But Bill said he was 50 yards away．
Then Bill’s wife explained Jack the hole．He said, “Bill went to a shop and bought a piece of
wood．He put it in the garden and shot at it from 50 yard away, only to shoot a hole．Then he
drew a target round a hole．”
单句改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）Because I haven’t been outdoors for so long, I’ve grown so crazy about everything do with nature.
It based more on German than the English we speak nowadays.
Our legs were too heavy and cold that they felt like blocks of ice.
We were both surprising to learn that half of the river is in China.
Although my sister didn’t know the best way of getting to places, she insisted that she organized the trip properly.
The dark rainy evening held me entire in their power.
It’ s no pleasure look through these any longer because nature is one thing that really must be experienced.
Here is my neighbor his house was destroyed in the earthquake.
The film, that we saw yesterday is interesting.
Do you want a friend to who you could tell everything?
Lucy was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made great progresses in my study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In other words, we would be separated for long time. Before she was left, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was a best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve kept in touch with each other through e-mail. I look forward to see her again in the near future.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，从第11处起不计分。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday afternoon, our class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in lecture hall. Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways.
For example, it will give us a good chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original. That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English. Finally, your story must be finished within three minutes. That’s all, thank you.
短文改错（共8小题；每小题0.5分, 满分4分）
下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并往该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改8处, 多者（从第9处起）不计分
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Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meeting. It was held on Oct.6, when was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do our best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.
Looking forward to receive your letter.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds the view that senior students have to make a full use of every minute to work hardly at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll be unable to control myself and forgot all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can accept her ideas.
In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard work. Beside, it is important for us to know that has happened at home and abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
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