第二卷
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
I’m the only daughter of my parents．So they worried about everything I do．For example, when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself．They are afraid I might fall off from my bike and hurt myself．They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with my mother even carrying a first-aid box．I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?” Now, most family have one child．Parents want to do everything for our children．This does no good to them．Too many love from parents may prevent children from independent．In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they should do alone．
Yours
LiHua
此题要求改正所给句子中的错误。下列个句黑体部分中都有且只有一个错误，并按下列情况改正：
此句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此句 缺一个：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ^ ）在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此句错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
完全正确的句子：在该行右边横线上打钩
Mr. Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters ______
in the height. He was born on November 4,1952. So ______
he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua ______
University in 1978. After graduation, he becomes a middle _____
school teacher. He has been teaching physics for more than 20 year. ______
He is very successf
ul as a teacher. He has been given a ______
lot of honors. I not only is a good teacher in ______
physics but also speaks English and Russian very good. ______
In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps ______
and listening music. Also, Mr. Smith is kind-hearted. ______
下面是一段文章，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Attention, please．We had received the weather forecast over
the radio that there will have a heavy rain tonight．Be sure to shut the
windows and doors before you leave their classrooms．Tomorrow it
will keep raining．The sports meet that we planned to hold it tomorrow
will be put down．After it becomes fine, we'll make another announcements．
We will have classes as usually．It will be cold and rainy tomorrow
but you'd better put more clothes in time．Don't keep your umbrellas open
while ride if you come to school by bike．It is very dangerous．
下面文中共有1
0处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改 后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday
on
evening.
Most of the large cities in the world have grown without plans, among that London is such a city.
Its streets wind its way and there is no reason or order to its street numbering system. Indeed,
no one but a practical taxi driver knows the whole of London. And before he gets his license, he
must first tour the city for month, street by street, and then take a test to prove that whether he can find
his way about. New York and Chicago grew in much the same way. They spread out like pouring water
expanding at all directions.
However, there are a few modern cities built strict according to detailed plans. The prime
example of a city planning and built from scratch in twentieth century is Brasilia, the new capital of
Brazil.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At first, I was not qu
ite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football match.
Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a game in that players
kicked a ball to each other. Therefore, my father loves football. During the World Cup in 2006,
my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport. Seeing him strongly interest in this game of
22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down to watch the game. I found game exciting, and my
dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with
my dad!
文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的
词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
A boy who was cleaning the shoes in the street said to a young man passed by, “Let me clean your boots. It just spends you only a penny.” But the man refused. Then the boy told him that he will clean his boots for nothing. The man agreed, and soon one of the boot shone brightly. Then he put the other boot on the box, and the boy refused to clean it if he was paid two pence for his work. The young man refused pay anything and went away. But the well-cleaning boot made the dirty one so bad that he could not walk on. He returned back and gave the boy two pence.
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