假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该增加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正的词。
注意：1. 原行没有错的不要改；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Li is a well-known doctor in our city. Kind but patient, he is always ready to do what he can help his patients. One day he learned from the medical magazine that patients will feel more pain if pleasant music is played to them. Soon he got an office in his own. So he decided to have beautifully music playing in his waiting-room. However, on one morning, an old lady who was sitting in the crowded waiting room became angry while listen to the music. She said, “We were all waiting to see the doctor, but he’s just playing the violin in his office instead of doing her work.”
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
1. 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
2. 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。
3. 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出
It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High___________
School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a _______
get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It
was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody _________
and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed
this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent
together and the people they were familiar with. It was
a pity which some of us were not present as they had
gone abroad for further studies, but they called back
or sent greeting card from different places.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，共有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at 8 in Friday evening.
on
At first, I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football
match.Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a
game in that players kicked a ball to each other. Therefore, my father loves football.
During the World Cup in 2006,my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport.
Seeing him strongly interest in this game of22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit
down to watch the game. I found game exciting, and my dad explained for the rules.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’d like to recommend my friend Li Hua to you, which__________
is going to apply a position in your firm. He graduated__________
from college three years ago and since then, he had worked as __________
a lawyer. He is good at English and knows any Japanese. __________
He works hard and is carefully in everything he does. Besides, __________
he is honest, kind and easy to get on with. He born on May 1 __________
1986 in Shanghai. More importantly, he show great interest in _________
your firm. If he is accepted, he will work more harder. __________
As married man, Li Hua lives at No.1132 Renmin Road __________
If you want to get more informations about him, please call him __________
At 6600371.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同旧式写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ladies and gentleman,
May I have your attention, please?
All flights this morning have put off, because our air is covered with thick fog. As there has no wind, the weatherman is unable to tell that the fog will clear up. We cannot do anything but waiting. Please keep in order and take good care of your baggage. Passengers, please don’t leave for the waiting room. As soon as the weather turns favorable, and we shall announce flights. For passengers stayed at the airport, lunch is free. It will be served in the dining hall in the second floor from eleven o’clock to one o’clock. By the way, there is no plane to arrive within a hour.
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